Wednesday, December 15, 2010

About me

My name is Brenda. I am thirteen year old. My hobbies are fencing, danceing and cooking. I am from Estonia. I have a twinsister. That ´s all! :)

1 comment:

  1. Welcome to blogging, Brenda! It is great to get to know you a little better!

    Two comments on how you can improve your introduction (tutvustus) - you can edit your post.
    * In the 2nd sentence - the word 'year' should be in plural (mitmuses) since there is not one, but thirteen of them
    * In the 3rd sentence - when a word ends with -e, then before adding -ing ending, the e disappears: dance > dancing

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